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What the editor missed! : Note and discuss errors the editor should have found!

Circle of Magic #6: The High King's Daughter - Debra Doyle & James Macdonald

"... the robe that met his hand was made of black velvet lined with silk. A closer look showed that it was sewn together in one piece without either stitch or needlework." Hmm - sewing without stitching - is that like welding?

Also, for the first three books, the main character is described as 'a sturdy black-haired youth.' On page 1 of book 4, he's become 'a tall, sturdily built youth in his middle teens, with untrimmed brown hair..' Wizarding depletes hair color?

Margaret H.
3 years ago
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